WALT: write a description like 'My Dad' by Anthony Browne
Criteria:
- Use Similes
- describe traits
- Use Metaphors
- Use Hyperbole
- Describe looks
- Describe an older male, e.g. Dad, uncle etc.
My Dad
My Dad is a lion roaring when he sleeps, grumbling and rumbling. He's as hard as iron and as tough as a rhino. My dad is a motorbike engine, loud and proud. He's as hot as fire and as cool as Ahab. My Dad likes to race with his motorbike. He works at a coke factory and he makes can of coke. My dad has green eyes and brown hair. He eats likes a pig but he's as wise as an owl. My Dad is a great racer and a good listener. He's alright my dad.
Well done Dallas!
ReplyDeleteGreat use of metaphors. I liked how you described his looks and his traits. A superb effort!
you done a good job better than mine!!!
ReplyDeletewell done dallas you done a good job at your writing
ReplyDeletewell done dallas it is cool
ReplyDeleteWell done Dallas on your writing! Good use of similies and metaphores.
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