Sunday, July 25, 2010

Dallas's Description



WALT: write a description like 'My Dad' by Anthony Browne
Criteria:
- Use Similes
- describe traits
- Use Metaphors
- Use Hyperbole
- Describe looks
- Describe an older male, e.g. Dad, uncle etc.

My Dad
My Dad is a lion roaring when he sleeps, grumbling and rumbling. He's as hard as iron and as tough as a rhino. My dad is a motorbike engine, loud and proud. He's as hot as fire and as cool as Ahab. My Dad likes to race with his motorbike. He works at a coke factory and he makes can of coke. My dad has green eyes and brown hair. He eats likes a pig but he's as wise as an owl. My Dad is a great racer and a good listener. He's alright my dad.