Instruction Writing

Now that we are back from camp we are learning to write instructions. Today as an activity we wrote instructions for our talking partner to find a letter around the school.

After writing we did a 5 minute reading test. Only one person in the whole class passed. Well done Raquel!

Here is a copy of the test. See how well you can do at home!

Anthony's Speech

WALT: write and present a speech
Delivery

• Expressive voice
• Clear, confident voice
• Body language & gestures
• Eye contact

Content

• Catchy intro
• Clear point
• Supports ideas with reasons
• Gives extra details
• Language features
• Overall impact

Foxtrot

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Everybody should sell their car and buy a bike. By Brittany

WALT: use the i see method.
-State my opinion
-Explain what I mean
-Give an Example

Bikes are good cars are bad.
Cars use too much fuel which is polluting our earth.
Bikes give you exercise and don't cost a lot.
I have a bike that cost me $99.00, but my mum got a car last year for $6000 plus a $18.000 truck.

Cars pollute the earth.
Cars use oil and fuel which is polluting the earth and is causing global warming.
In order for cars to go they need Oil so in order for us to use oil in our cars we need to ship it from the United States to New Zealand,and when a fire starts on a oil ship it can explode and leak for days even months before we can stop it. Which means New Zealand may end up like the gulf of Mexico.

Cars cost too much.
For some New Zealanders it costs too much to register their cars do the warrant of fitness and more. Fuel is getting too costly and is bad for our Enviroment.

Silent e Spelling Rule

WALT: Spell long vowel sounds in two Syllable words using the silent e

mak + e = make
peac + e = peace
Snak + e = Snake
bik + e = bike
pictur + e = picture
Sham + e = Shame
car + e = care

Fact or Fiction?

Wow I had no idea that Giants are real and here is the proof!
Check it out!



After watching the film do you think they are real?
Are these real images? Why? Why not?

Dallas's Description

WALT: write a description like 'My Dad' by Anthony Browne
Criteria:
- Use Similes
- describe traits
- Use Metaphors
- Use Hyperbole
- Describe looks
- Describe an older male, e.g. Dad, uncle etc.

My Dad

My Dad is a lion roaring when he sleeps, grumbling and rumbling. He's as hard as iron and as tough as a rhino. My dad is a motorbike engine, loud and proud. He's as hot as fire and as cool as Ahab. My Dad likes to race with his motorbike. He works at a coke factory and he makes can of coke. My dad has green eyes and brown hair. He eats likes a pig but he's as wise as an owl. My Dad is a great racer and a good listener. He's alright my dad.

Tom's Explanation

WALT: Write effective explanations
Success Criteria:
Use a plan with a description, information, and summary
Not use the first person
Add detail to support my ideas
Use specific Scientific words
Use the present tense
Make our sentences make sense

New Zealand’s Native Bat

The Peka-Peka is New Zealand’s native bat. Some have short tails, but others grow a bit longer and their bodies are the size of a adult’s thumb. The greater short tailed bat was extinct in 1960.

Bats are nocturnal, which means their life is opposite, if you compare it to our lives. This is because they sleep by day and hunt by night. They live in hollows of trees and live in colonies of hundreds.

Bats feast on moths, beetles, mosquitos and other flying insects. They can be found on stewart island, little barrier island and great barrier island. Their weight is usually around 8-11 grams and they torpor, which means they sleep in winter. They can also be found on Kapiti Island and can fly up to a speed of 60 kilometers per hour.

Bats use echolocation to hunt because of the darkness. They use this by making clicking sounds to high-pitch for humans to hear. When the sound hits something the echo bounces back to them. They use this to identify the location’s size and objects in the way.

Bats dye because to many people only think about themselves. People cut down trees for firewood and then some people then sell the firewood for money. The Peka-Peka is endangered mainly because of this reason. They are also endangered because of their predators. These are the animals that kill and eat the peka-peka. This group of predators includes possums, cats, stoats, wasps and rats. But also on that list is humans.

So the Peka-Peka is native to new Zealand, are nocturnal and are endangered. There is already 1 species extinct and they are the size of a adults thumb.

Jordan's Bat Explanation

WALT: Write effective explanations

Success Criteria:

• Use a plan with a description, information, and summary
• Not use the first person
• Add detail to support my ideas
• Use specific Scientific words
• Use the present tense
• Make our sentences make sense

Title: The nocturnal bat

Description:

A Pekapeka bat is a New Zealand mammal. Bats are one of our natives and there are different types of Bats like the short tail, long tail and the greater short tail bat that was made extinct in the 1960s.

Identifying statement:

What do bats do at night?

Bats are nocturnal, that means they sleep in the day and come out in the night. When they come out in the night they go out in colonies from hollows in trees.

Where are bats and what do they eat?

Bats are in places like Kapiti and Stewart Island. Bats like to eat flying insects like beetles and mosquitos. Bats don’t hibernate for long in the winter, they only hibernate for 10 days.

What happens to them and what do they use?

Bats like to hunt and use echolocation. Some Bats use a special clicking noise to communicate. Some times humans can scare bats out of there homes and under bridges. Some Bats live in national parks around the world. Bats are endangered because of predators like cats, possums, rats, wasps and stoats.

Conclusion:

Bat’s are one of our native animals and they don’t hibernate for long.

Liam's Possum Explanation